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十月 金秋
春的绿，夏的红 还有金灿灿的秋 看那, 飘香的农田 看那, 成熟的果园 看那, 活力的盛典 (年轻脖颈上的奖牌) 希望中, 播下种子 阳光下, 汗水浇灌 春播夏耕者们 享受这丰收的喜悦吧 收割你沉甸甸的谷子 打谷场上，风扬去筛糠 屯粮仓里，越来越局促 哪怕田里, 还有未拾谷穗 我拾起, 黄色落叶一片 让飞鸟, 衔去丰收喜悦 飞鸟她, 又捎来你祝贺 并瞩照, 着嵇康的秘方 余粮在, 地窖里酿制着
原来品着陈年的葡萄醇酒 还能接着酿制粮食的酒 原来我们的过去、未来都是美酒 而现在就是酿酒 噢，真是令人心醉的工作！ (注: 品酒与酿酒, 收成与劳作, 是同样令人心醉的工作, just like loving someone or being loved by someone, or writing creatively or reading enjoyably, is of same enjoyment and amusement. )
Note: kind of too early for release.
噢，金秋,
一个收获的季节
一个喜庆的季节
一个劳作的季节
一个欢声笑语, 喜乐不尽的季节
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| | my pleasure. cheers and enjoy. |
| | thank you, my very friend. you are so kind, that saying thank is too limited. just do the enjoyable things you as well as i like to do. i am honoured by you. cheers and bless! :) |
| | thank you. just wondering why .... // dear friend. sorry for the confusion. everything is good and perfect. always like your writings. and always no need to rewrite. and the beauty of your writing is that it may give other people some space to play around. for the rewrite, it may not necessarily mean to make improvement or else, rather it is just to get some limited input to the body of your verse. and it is a lot of fun. btw: it might be sometimes too lazy or difficult to modify the whole thing. it may be sometimes short of time to do serious rewrite for the whole thing. or it might be to give it a bit free space for others to play around and to expand their imagination,.... no worry. you are so wonderful and your writings are so beautiful that i am, as well as other people are, willing to spend time to graze or to hang around. best regards and have a good night. |
| | thank you. just wondering why (原来...工作)the last paragraph is deleted in your rewriting. isn't it good enough, or maybe am just too foolish writing those lines? i needa know before can go further. in any case, i did have good time here till now,dued to your sharings.thanks should be a must |
| 金秋 春的绿，夏的红 还有金灿灿的秋 看那, 飘香的农田 看那, 成熟的果园 看那, 活力的盛典 (年轻脖颈上的奖牌) 希望中, 播下种子 阳光下, 汗水浇灌 春播夏耕者们 享受这丰收的喜悦吧 收割你沉甸甸的谷子 打谷场上，风扬去筛糠 屯粮仓里，越来越局促 哪怕田里, 还有未拾谷穗 我拾起, 黄色落叶一片 让飞鸟, 衔去丰收喜悦 飞鸟她, 又捎来你祝贺 并瞩照, 着嵇康的秘方 余粮在, 地窖里酿制着
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wetty
