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Sweetness

字体[大中小] 颜色[蓝绿黑]

分类：文学创作

创建于：2008-08-12

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来源：未名交友

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Sweetness
If you ask me what is sweet
I would say oh, it’s the summer breeze
Tend’ly blowin’ on my face, I feel cool
‘nd the scorchin’ heat I can get through
Along the path in the middle of a forest
Shadows being scattered among the sunlights
I climbed on the top of the hill ‘nd took a rest
Lingerin’ in the pavilion while the sweat bein’ dried
Sun set down on other side of hill
Yet shining ‘nd flowin’ ‘nd ripplin’ the water
Under the sky, darker ‘nd darker
In a boat I smell the water lilies
How sweet, brought with the summer breeze
How deep, the fragrance penetratin’ my skin beneath…

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wetty回复于：2008-08-13 22:21:04

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that's for sure. as it for me, i wrote serious(or big) poems, and delightful ones as well. maybe the later is the most cases, as this one

have funs, as much as we can:))

cheers!

unavail回复于：2008-08-13 13:19:18

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// forget to mention: this is my play-around, not necessarily meaning it will be better, but, for sure, it is making life interesting and more fun. thanks for sharing. cheers and enjoy. and have a nice day.

Sunset on other side of hill

Yet, shining ‘nd water ripplin’

Under sky, darker ‘nd darker

In a boat I smell water lilies smile

wetty回复于：2008-08-13 08:41:02

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thank you for the rewriting

work while you work and play while you play

so nice, more than just okey.. hehe :)

enjoy!

unavail回复于：2008-08-13 01:30:04

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// still need more time to play around.

Sweetness
1.

What is sweet
It’s summer breeze
Tend’ly blowin’
Cool in the heat

Sweet, summer breeze
Tend’ly blowin’, cool I feel
2.

Along the path in the middle of a forest
Shadows being scattered among the sunlights
I climbed on the top of the hill ‘nd took a rest
Lingerin’ in the pavilion while the sweat bein’ dried
3. // nice. like an oil painting

Sunset down on other side of hill
Yet shining ‘nd flowin’ ‘nd ripplin’ the water
Under the sky, darker ‘nd darker
In a boat I smell the water lilies
4.

Sweet, summer breeze
Deep, fragrance skin beneath…