that's for sure. as it for me, i wrote serious(or big) poems, and delightful ones as well. maybe the later is the most cases, as this one

have funs, as much as we can:))

cheers!

Yet, shining ‘nd water ripplin’

Under sky, darker ‘nd darker

In a boat I smell water lilies smile

thank you for the rewriting

work while you work and play while you play

so nice, more than just okey.. hehe :)

enjoy!

// still need more time to play around.

Sweetness 

1.

What is sweet

It’s summer breeze

Tend’ly blowin’
Cool in the heat

Sweet, summer breeze
Tend’ly blowin’, cool I feel

2.

Along the path in the middle of a forest

Shadows being scattered among the sunlights

I climbed on the top of the hill ‘nd took a rest

Lingerin’ in the pavilion while the sweat bein’ dried 

3.  // nice. like an oil painting

Sunset down on other side of hill

Yet shining ‘nd flowin’ ‘nd ripplin’ the water

Under the sky, darker ‘nd darker

In a boat I smell the water lilies 

4.

Sweet, summer breeze

Deep, fragrance skin beneath…